Assignment notes

Detail (but don't overdo it)

"The Room was vacant."

Develope – explain – expand    Show not tell

create a vacant room without saying "The room was vacant" (1) Show what isn't there (2) Show it, don't say how it looks to me (3) If abstract, show why, show what creates your impression.

thoroughness 1/2 page

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Dinah from Kabalor

Author. Discardian. GM. Current project: creating an inclusive indie fantasy ttrpg https://www.patreon.com/kabalor

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